Sunday, January 25, 2009

Actually She Had It...








Till now i was stuck,

drowning in the blackwaters of pain and bluff...

Thinking i have reached the point of no return,

and the only option left is to be reborn...












Then one day i met her,

although accidently but it had a metaphor...

I m still confused where she came from,

or is it that she was really there,

maybe i was carried away by the norms...












It looked as if she was designed to take away my misery,

don't know how she understood everything i said gradually...

We talked for hours as if i knew her for lives,

and shared things i wouldn't with my wife...









And than the clock struck two,

she said she had to go but we both were not finished through...

She went just to come back in my dreams,

so that we can continue and talk about what was unseen...












She came with a captivating smile on her face,

her eyes were so innocent,

pure than love...

She briskly held my hand,

and took me out of trance...












Her lips were moving,

but her eyes were focussed on me,

as if she was making a connection that was so devine,

and filled with serenity...












We shared a lot,

and it was better than i thought...

But at last it was time for her to go,

i never wanted but she convinced me though...









She looked into my eyes,

as if saying she will be there every night...

Than she kissed my hand,

and gently faded as sand...

Leaving just the feel behind,

and a hope that she will come back next time...

11 comments:

Anurag said...

beautiful choice of words man... it is as if u can visualize every sentence.. well articulated.. keep it up buddy...

i want to be... said...

dat happened wid me in real buddy...hehe neways thanx for the appreciation...

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Anonymous said...

its a beautiful rhyme
Neat n sublime..
Keep up d good work!
n i'll never call u a jerk!!

i want to be... said...

hey thanx anonymous...theres another poet in da making...hahaha

Ann said...

Awesome !!! You write very well...

i want to be... said...

@ girl nxt door
thanks!!

♥ ♥ Her- his ° ♥ ♥ said...

awesome blossom...

i cant imagine a guy being an immense poet...!!
u rock

i want to be... said...

@vanity in love
hehe dat was quite a compliment...thanks a ton!!!